My sweet love

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Kaibod (Generic Zoner) on Tuesday, 26-Oct-2010 11:16:31

Sitting here and thinking
First thing that comes to my mind is you.
What are you doing,
What are you up to.
I really do miss you so much
I wish I could just feel your nice gentle touch.
See your face and your beautifulist smile
It’ll make my whole world go completely wild.
Your lips are so sweet and your eyes are so nice and blue
Such long hair and a love that is so true.
A walk that will make me go crazy
Make me happy to say there goes my lady.
A voice I hear heaven everytime you speak
A voice that makes me shiver and go weak.
A smile that lights up my day
A smile that elp me see the right way.
I get lost in your eyes
Make me turn into a complete other guy.
It’s so amazing how you came to me
Help open my eyes so that I can see.
Love, how it really feels
Love, that I know is real.
Love, care, and compassion that is so deep
Makes a smile come to my face when I go to sleep.
So beautiful so nice and so mine
One of a kind, and is always on my mind.
My sweet love, how I long to hold you so
Keep you here and never let you go.
In my arms forever with me
Just living and loving for all eternity.
I know you have fallen from up above
I eally do love you, my sweet love.

Post 2 by the black devil (Newborn Zoner) on Friday, 29-Oct-2010 12:35:43

that's real good man, I like it a lot.

Post 3 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Friday, 29-Oct-2010 20:39:15

awe that is so sweet david. my baby brother

Post 4 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Saturday, 30-Oct-2010 17:15:03

i am really crying. such amazing words of love that make me wonder if they can really exist and be true

Post 5 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Wednesday, 24-Nov-2010 11:31:45

This is an excellently sweet poem. Keep up the good work.